Brooks’s ‘Sadie and Maud’ contrasts two life choices. Analyse voice, structure, and tone to see how expectations, freedom, and regret are presented.
Sadie and Maud
Maud went to college.
Sadie stayed home.
Sadie scraped life
With a fine toothed comb.
She didn't leave a tangle in
Her comb found every strand.
Sadie was one of the livingest chicks
In all the land.
Sadie bore two babies
Under her maiden name.
Maud and Ma and Papa
Nearly died of shame.
When Sadie said her last so-long
Her girls struck out from home.
(Sadie left as heritage
Her fine-toothed comb.)
Maud, who went to college,
Is a thin brown mouse.
She is living all alone
In this old house.
Gwendolyn Brooks
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The pattern of syllables (5/4/4/5) in the first stanza has a distinctly nursery-rhyme feel, an effect reinforced by its words. Rhyming pairs such as 'mouse / house' create the same impression
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Maud goes to college, as her parents most likely expect of her. This action implies that she is clever and ambitious, while the contrast with Sadie implies that Maud is also more sensible
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The words 'fine toothed', 'scraped', 'didn't leave a tangle' and 'found every strand' emphasise Sadie's thoroughness in enjoying everything life has to offer
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Ma, Papa and Maud don't respond well to Sadie's single motherhood
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Maud is left alone, 'a thin brown mouse'
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'Under her maiden name' fits especially awkwardly in the pattern, reminding the reader what a shock the situation was for Sadie's parents
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